学期：2015-2016学年第2学期 

学时：32 

学分：2 

授课对象：英语14级1-4班 

教材：《写作教程（、第二册）》，上海外语教育出版社，邹申主编，2011年7月 

任课教师：郭大光、唐晓东、孙丽、陈琳 

1．课程概要：

英语基础写作（二）是英语专业的基础核心课程，也是一门技能课程。它的主要任务是通过系统学习英语写作的书写格式、措辞、造句、段落、文章整体结构及标点符号等方面知识，使学生写作能力逐步提高。本课程重点在于专业四级中对于便条、书信的书写及各种文体的写作。 

2．课程成果：

学完本课程的学生应达到如下要求： 

1．能写日常应用文（便条、信函等）； 

2．掌握各种文体的写法； 

3．内容完整，条理清晰，文笔通畅。 

3．课程考核及成绩：

课程成绩（100%）=平时考核（100%）+期末考试（0%）

平时考核（100%）=作业（20%）*5次 

平时成绩： 

1.如发现学生作业雷同，或学生从网上和其他资源摘抄的现象，该次作业记0分； 

2.病假、事假1次，扣2分；迟到1次，扣5分；旷课1次，扣10分；旷课3次，平时成绩为0分，课程成绩为0； 

3.学生违反课堂纪律、上课睡觉、做于课堂无关的事情、不认真完成课堂翻译练习的，每次扣1分。 

期末考试：无，根据平时作业计算期末成绩。 

 

第一次课课程介绍、专四写作部分介绍

一、课程成果

1.了解本课程具体情况； 

2.了解专四写作部分的要求。 

二、学时安排（2课时）

1．课程介绍、专四写作介绍：1课时 

2．应试写作：1课时 

三、教学内容

（一）课程教学要求

1、师生密切配合，高效、高质完成教和学。 

2、师生教学多沟通和交流，经常进行答疑。 

3、尊重老师，尊重学生，遵守纪律，不旷课，不迟到和早退，有事请假，上课认真听讲，遵守课堂纪律，不讲话，不吃东西，不做其他影响老师和同学听课的事情。 

4、诚信考试，诚信考试，自觉养成好的学习习惯，培养学习方法。 

5、希望同学能认真记课堂笔记，便于掌握老师的教学内容。 

6、按时完成作业，不抄袭，及时消化和理解上课内容，不留欠债。 

7、课程学习纪律：小班授课，坚持每次点名，旷课3次取消考核资格；学生学习态度端正，课上练习认真，课上练习不认真者扣除课堂表现成绩；测试和考试舞弊，取消考核资格。 

8、班级学习委员负责与老师联系教学，收发作业。 

（二）教学环节安排

1、学时安排：课程总学时32学时。

2、课程考核及成绩：

课程成绩（100%）=平时考核（100%）+期末考试（0%） 

平时考核（100%）=作业（20%）*5次 

平时成绩： 

4.如发现学生作业雷同，或学生从网上和其他资源摘抄的现象，该次作业记0分； 

5.病假、事假1次，扣2分；迟到1次，扣5分；旷课1次，扣10分；旷课3次，平时成绩为0分，课程成绩为0； 

6.学生违反课堂纪律、上课睡觉、做于课堂无关的事情、不认真完成课堂翻译练习的，每次扣1分。 

期末考试：无，根据平时作业计算期末成绩。 

（三）专业四级写作部分介绍

1.Grading 15+10=25 

2.Types 

a.compare and contrast对比选择：一个话题，两种观点或选择，对比优缺点，选择一种作为自己的观点并论证其正确性 

b.fixed idea给定观点：一个话题，一种观点，关键在于如何更好的论证给定的观点 

c.free argument自由发挥：一个话题，一些大家对此话题的观点和看法，根据材料作出自己的分析，提出论点，并论证。对考生观点不做限定，既可以选择题目给出的观点中的一个，也可以自己提出一个题目没有提供的想法。 

d.chart图表 

e.fixed condition规定情景：没有规定的标题，从给出的情景中找出中心思想，然后确定文章的标题和段落结构。 

3.Analysis of the types (1993-2008) 

对比选择：8次，可分三类： 

Advantages/Disadvantages: 99, 95, 94 

A/B: 06, 04, 96 

Yes/No: 07, 97 

给定观点：4次，08，03，00，01 

自由发挥：4次，可分两类： 

My idea: 05, 93 

The best way: 02, 98 

（四）写作练习

第二次课议论文写作方法1

（一）优缺点型议论文

Model 

People’s viewstowards the advantages and disadvantages of TOPIC vary greatly. Some believethat OPINION1, while others argue that OPINION2. As for me, I agree to theformer/latter idea because its advantages outweigh its disadvantages. 

There are dozenof reasons behind my belief. First of all, REASON1. EVIDENCE1. 

The secondreason that can be seen by every person is that REASON2. For example,EVIDENCE2. 

From the above,we can easily see that TOPIC is beneficial both to SUMMARY OF REASON1&2. 

 

（二）写作练习

Exercise 

We seeadvertisements on television every day. Some people think that TV advertisingbrings us benefits, hut others don’t think so. What is your opinion? Write onANSWER SHEET ONE a composition of about 150 words on the following topic: 

A MAJOR ADVANTAGE / DISADVANTAGE OF ADVERTISING ON TELEVISION  

You are to write in three paragraphs. In the first paragraph, state just ONEmajor advantage or disadvantage of TV advertising. In the second paragraph,give one or two reasons to support your point of view. In the last paragraph,bring what you have written to a natural conclusion. Marks will he awarded forcontent, organization, grammar andappropriacy. Failureto follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

第三次课议论文写作方法2

（一）是否型议论文

Yes/No 

It has longbeen a contentious issue as to whether TOPIC. Some people are of the opinionthat OPINION1, while others point out that OPINION2. as far as I am concerned,the former/latter opinion holds more weight. 

For one thing,SUPPORTING DETAILS 1.支持观点1的理由，阐述理由1。 

The another,SUPPORTING DETAILS 2.支持观点2的理由，阐述理由2。 

Now, afterclose examination, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that SUMMARY OFOPINION. Therefore, as university students, we should GIVE SUGGESTIONS. 

 

（二）写作练习

Write a composition of about 200 words onthe following topic: 

Some of your classmates think thatmore pressure from academic studies is not beneficial to students. 

You either agree or disagree withthem. 

MORE PRESSURE FROM ACADEMICSTUDIES DOES (ORDOES NO) GOOD TO US 

You are to write in threeparagraphs. 

In the first paragraph state clearlywhat your view is. 

In the second paragraph, supportyour view with details. 

In the last paragraph, bring whatyou have written to a natural conclusion with a summary or suggestion. 

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar andappropriacy. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks. 

第四次课议论文写作方法3

（一）选择型议论文

The argumentover A or B has recently been brought into focus. Quite a few deem that支持A的观点，but others, in contrast,take B as the premier choice. Personally,论点. 

The main reasonfor myinclinationfor A is that支持论点的理由1.If用假想的例子证明理由1. Furthermore,支持论点的理由2。证明理由2。Among all of the supportingevidences, the strongest one is支持论点的理由3。证明理由3。

The B way ofthinking is too limited.（阐述B的局限性。）Asa college student, I am supposed to表决心，because总结理由1，2，3。 

 

（二）写作练习

Section A Composition 

Recentlya Beijing information company did a survey of student life among more than 700students in Beijing, Guangzhou, Xi'an, Chengdu, Shanghai, Wuhan, Nanjing, and Shenyang . The results have shown that 67 percent of students think thatsaving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrow's moneytoday is better, what do you think? 

Writeon answer sheet two a compositions of about 200 words. 

Youare to write in three parts. 

Inthe first part, state specifically what you opinion is 

Inthe second part, support your opinion with appropriate detail. 

Inthe last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or asummary. 

Youshould supply an appropriate title for you composition. 

Marks will be awarded forcontent, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow theinstructions may result in a loss of marks. 

第五次课议论文写作方法4

（一）选择型议论文

通过现象引出话题。As a result, some people are worried that A与B之间的矛盾. However, I don’t think their concerns arenecessary, because A has some exclusive advantages over B. 

First of all, A与B比较优势1.A的优点. However, B的缺点. 

Furthermore, A与B比较优势2. For example,举例说明优势2. 

Last but notthe least, A与B比较优势3. A的优点. In contrast, B的缺点. 

In short, A hassome merits that B doesn’t have. Therefore,结论. 

 

（二）写作练习

SECTION A COMPOSITION 

Nowadays young people tend to phone more often thanwrite to each other. So, some say that phones will kill letter writing. What isyour opinion? 

 Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a composition of about 200 words on thefollowing topic: 

WILL PHONES KILL LETTER WRITING? 

You are to write in three parts. 

In the first part, state specifically what your view is. 

In the second part, support your view with one or two reasons. 

In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or asummary. 

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks. 

 

第六次课议论文写作方法5

（一）规定主题型

Fixed idea 

Nowadays, with现象, people are becoming increasing aware of the significanceof主题词. Inmy point of view,把标题句变成陈述句. There are numerous reasons to support my point of view, and Iwould explore only a few of the most important ones here. 

One of theprimary causes is that论点理由1. As the saying goes,引用名言证明理由. 

Another reasonthat can be seen by every person is that论点理由2.阐明理由. 

Taking intoaccount of all these factors, we may draw the conclusion that重述标题观点或论点. Therefore,提出意见或建议. 

 

（二）写作练习

SECTION A COMPOSITION［35 MIN.］ 

Peoplein modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, orfamily. So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatevercircumstances. Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a composition of about 200 words onthe following topic: 

THE IMPORTANCE OFKEEPING A GOOD MOOD 

Youare to write in three parts. 

Inthe first part, state specifically what your view is. 

Inthe second part, support your view with one or two reasons. 

Inthe last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or asummary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar andappropriacy. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks. 

 

第七次课议论文写作方法6

（一）规定主题型

Fixed Idea 

Upon thebenefit/importance/significance of题中关键字, people share a common view that论点. As to me, I can’t agree more with them.题中关键词should, undoubtedly, be anindispensable part of our life. 

Let’s take…as anexample…Other examples can also be found to justify the proverb. … is a case inpoint. 

结尾1，Judgingfrom the examples given above, we may safely come to the conclusion that…. Sowhy not… 

结尾2，So,based on the above discussion, there is no doubt that综合1，2，3理由. What worths mentioning is that再次强调或引申论点. 

 

（二）写作练习

SECTION A COMPOSITION 

Travel has become part of our life. And more and more of us have come to knowthe significance of travel through our own experience. Write a composition ofabout 200 words on the following topic: 

TRAVEL BROADENS THE MIND 

Youare to write in three parts. 

In the firstpart, state what the topic actually means to you. 

In the secondpart, give one or two examples to illustrate your ideas. 

In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion ora summary. 

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy.Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks. 

第八次课议论文写作方法7

（一）规定主题型

Fixed Idea 

Model 

Now, there is agrowing awareness among out students that引出话题/现象. From my point ofview,论点. I will explain why this is the case. 

Body 1:I canthink of no better illustration of this idea than the example of论证1，2，3.

Body 2:History is filled withexamples of论点in my mind.This proverb can be justified in three respects.1，2，3 

Allreliable data pile up to show the point that ./So from what has been discussed, one can reachonly this conclusion that.Students should提出建议. If we can manage to改良的方法, our life willbe more enjoyable.  

 

（二）写作练习

Section One Composition 

College lifeshould be varied and colorful. And extracurricular activities are an importantaspect of it. However, at present, there is much room for improvement in thisregard. Write an article entitled: 

Theimportance of extracurricular activities